In the coldness of the Mountain Air,
I realize that its impossible to bear,
The fact that she who I love so very dearly,
Doesn't have the time to speak merely.
My pleadings and vituperation reach deaf ears,
I try so very hard to allay my fears.
My words are obstructed by a wall impregnable.
I request her to acknowledge and be noble.
The stillness of the surrounding tarn,
And the quietude of the Interlaken dawn ,
Injected in me one fleeting but powerful message.
The way to success doesn't have in its path, rage.
As the climbers get ready to acquire the throne,
Her beautiful and gleaming countenance to me ,was shown.
They set off to realize their dreams and acquire the peak,
That magnificent goddess is what I seek.
The hours have faded into days, slow but steady
The quality of the climbers as they progress.
At them I stared, this time though however very ready,
I see my apex and have no reason to digress.
Completion of a monumental task, gives pleasure incredibly immense,
Difficulties and obstacles are sure to come to make one tense,
The unyielding and mighty motivation tears them asunder,
Once at the apex, you know it was worth all the plunder .
To win the hands of a fabulous fairy,
A massive trip has to be undertaken, however scary.
The signs of success might at very first glance,
Be all up to the ever so kind almighty and chance.
The strong rays of the morning sun melt the glaciers,
The rays which melt her heart are my saviors.
I see her from a distance far far away,
Just like the sun, I hope I become someday
That without which she cannot live.
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19 comments:
I would hope there's a true story behind this...
And not that I know shit about poetry, but its not all about rhyming.
Hey .. I shud say .. M pretty impressed ... dam good ( for an engineer .. ) but like i said I think sometimes u try a bit too hard to rhyme ...itz not all abt matching words ...Also, you start and end with so much passion but u dont sustain that tempo thru and thru ... sometimes it wavers a bit ...
certain words and phrases can be avoided ..i wont say which ones.. becoz m sure u thought every word thru .. but these r sure-fire giveaways that u r an inexp poet .. but Vig m touched :) didnt know you could write
we have found you
its on my status. U r supposed to find me.
Hmmm... nice to see this come from a person who once wrote "I am enamored with mathematics"
:)
Your poems shall become my band's songs!!
I like brither's (bharat) last one best ...
ps v - i understand the angst if this is based on a real story.
but vituperation ellam too much da ..
- vikram
@ desba, its not free for all. the poem belongs to someone and even me being the poet can't authorize u to make use of it.
@ vetti ram, i m thinkin of a phd in english literature at oxford. the finance industry is very dull .
@ brither, well tried my friend.
I think its poverty to arbidly kill of your burgeoning talent. Write and enjoy.
Same feeling!as the joker puts it, you complete me. Write, we will read.
how are you da? long time no see. im typing it here coz you blocked me on gmail since i made rude comments about your poems.
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